AIM 2023 Judge Review
What I love most about this track is its ability to capture the background of its inspiration. The chord progression and sound design sold me on musically setting a nighttime scene with a lot of street lights shining, which does reflect what's being shown in the art. The production sounds very full but also as if it's pulsating, which seems to bring life to the lights.
There's a lot of nice compositional choices here, particularly in the addition of that higher synth that soars above the intensive lower ends of the track like at 2:10 and the guitar part at 2:40 and its syncopated off-notes were quite satisfying. Honestly I would have loved to hear the guitar part break into a full-on solo, like it almost sounded like it was going to do.
While I believe this entry captures the environment of its art inspiration well, I found myself struggling to hear how inspiration was being drawn from the subjects within the artwork: the person and the bird on the street. I mean the streetlights are a part of the art, but it seemed like a missed opportunity to not draw any inspiration from the main focus of the art. I didn't see any intention to portray the subjects nor did I get any sense of that from the music.
And sure, listening to the music itself, I like it just fine. But when judging this in regards to its relevance to the art, the only thing I'm wondering is why you picked this art piece over any other art piece on Newgrounds that captures just a night scene with a street and streetlights?
The other thing I would have liked to hear, music-wise, is more clarity in the production. The track definitely feels like it's way too chocked up in the lower ends and I feel like it's hard to listen to, at least multiple times in a row. The higher synths and guitar part helped to make this a bit of an easier listen, but looking at the waveform on this track, it feels like some instruments were overblown.
Despite my criticisms, I do like a lot of aspects in this track - the chord progression the entire entry is based on is very good and when it changes to that third chord, I feel a sense of hopefulness coming through. Overall, you've made a lot of entries for AIM where the composition was one of your strong suits, and I think this entry slots right into there.