you may be onto something
i like this track, but there's one major problem: there is little variation among the song. it doesn't evolve, the melody doesn't change, it simply just is. you had the right idea with some of the other sections, namely at 2:54, but it goes for way too long without development, but if you keep cracking at music, you could be incredibly good
don't let my critiques discourage you. i genuinely believe that you could be great