Hello, NG! This is my new song, i hope you all like it!
I sing in portuguese but i'll put the translation here!
Towards the top that is my wish. Overcoming challenges, dreaming of your kiss. I'm just another guy, but I fight fiercely. I live for running, I will win for us. I don't rest until I arrive, I'll call you later. So let's travel? Just to get started. It has to be from the soul, It has to be "for fun", It has to be pleasurable, because there is no tomorrow. This is the life I dreamed of for myself, With you by my side I will go until the end. I never get tired of looking at you. Where you are is always the best place so come... We will continue together, with you until the end! There is no after, Save your best for me.
Dope flow. :) Wish I understood a bit of what it's about but I can definitely vibe with it! Sounds tough.
For the hooks, might be even better if you warm up a bit more, vocals sound a little held back when you sing there. Melodically good but like it could be a little more open/vibrant, if you know what I mean?
Great stuff, keep it up!
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You made a super review! Thank's for the tips. Your work is very good too!
edit: i put the translation in the description!
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