I like the rhythmic content at the beginning. The instrument at the beginning itself sounds a bit muddy and distorted, but the pads at :07 are nice. The bass and the lead synth at :23 are tripping over each other a bit - just very different emphases in the rhythms they’re playing. I like the tambourine at :38 and the more melodic synth line there too. The extended pause at :56 is a bit awkward, but I like the furtive synth line that comes after it at :59. The synth at 1:13 sounds a bit harsh - maybe you could use an equalizer to filter out some of the treble-range frequencies? I like how you brought the piece full-circle at the end with the second refrain at 1:37, and the added melodies at 1:52 are a nice touch. During the section at 1:52, it’s a little hard to make out the drums and bass in the mix. You might try adding a compressor to the drums and eliminating the bass frequencies (200 Hertz and lower) in the melodic instruments. Overall, this is a cute piece with some nice compositional elements - you clearly have a good sense of harmony, rhythm, and progression. That said, the sound design is a bit cheesy, and the mix sounds pretty quiet and indistinct at times. Still, I think the piece has a great charm about it, and I hope you keep working on it. Keep at it, MaskHeroe! :)

Mixing, mastering, and balance
1/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
1/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
1.5/2
Instrumentation and sound design
.5/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1.25/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
.5/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
.5/1
Composite score
6.25/10

Me gusta mucho el cambio de tono de la canción,tienes un estilo muy propio, buena! :)