okay, so, the only thing I can really talk about here is how abrupt the change between two "realities" are. The most prime example of this is probably around from 00:13 to 00:15.
there are no risers or any uplifters, reverse crashes with a panner effect to really give this a super nice feel (panner and reverb are really good together if done right). Besides of the abrupt transitions, it doesn't quite take away how cool this idea was implemented in this song and how it was executed. great job! :D