I really like this song. It starts ambient but gets more intense and turns into a chase, like a hard journey. Then there's some breathing space in the song with some spacey whirring noises as if they reached their destination and are trying to comprehend where they just landed. The synth after that sounds very melodic, southing, and Sci-Fi like, as if they are exploring and finding cool things. The final part loops back around to the first, and it's like they explored and realized how hostile the place is. At the end, they escape safely.

Overall, very good work, but I have some complaints. The drum sections feel a bit too long. Also, the whirring section feels a bit empty, maybe add a synth melody or some light drums to that part. Otherwise, great job! You're doing better and you're improving.