A good effort, but I think you overdid it with those vocal samples. Not only that, you could have at least put the beat in the Fruity Slicer so you could manipulate it and switch the beat up a little rather than using that sample raw. The instrumentation was... different. Some things worked surprisingly well. but you should add some more melodies or beats or something rather than piling on vocal samples.
Yes I think I did...It's the first song I ever made...chec out my other works (crazy electro buzz is better)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.