Yeah like phenorax said, it does need a bit of variation, but I still do think it is a good track, practice makes perfect man, keep up the good work! :)

Review Request attendee here. Sounds like a remastered soundtrack of one of the first Prince of Persia games. The melody is good. The drums need a bit more work, try and include them more here and there.
It's decent but it needs to be a bit more varied, however as is it's functional and does it's job well.