Feeling the drums and ambient cords, but the melody stays the same for a bit to long.
Try having the melody expand to other instruments on the track, or add a solo for some texture.
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I finally finished another song and it turned out great (to me). I made this in only two days because I only heard about the contest on Waterflame's Discord server which he announced the contest on YouTube which was a shame because it was at a time where there was only three days left, and I am super slow when it comes to music production and I didn't have much time to do so it might sound rushed both in arrangement and mixing/mastering wise (I'm still learning how to do this, don't go harsh on me)!
Overall, I am proud of this track though it is pretty short and it was a genre I wanted to try out (trance) .
And also, first song released from FL Studio 21, what do you guys think?
This song will have a little makeover and extension so keep an eye for a better version... ...and here it is: https://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/1280149
GDoinks responds:
Yeah, I also felt like I didn't give the melody enough justice and thought I over did it. I'll keep that in mind for future songs.
Thank you for the critizism! :D
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