it seems kind of loud but then again i probably just have my volume too high lmao
nice melodies and bass, the parts at 0:20 and 1:30 are very nice to listen to

edit: looking back at even your most recent songs the improvement is insane

this is really good i like the part where theres that one note that goes like "dooo" you know? i think you are a very creative artist who will thrive later on in the music community.

Amazing track! Structure is too experimental tho, some parts could be much longer, I enjoyed first part with no melody except bass, if it was my track I would turn it in a heavier A part of the drop, and then introduce more melodical elements as a B part of a drop. Just my ideas, anyway that track is goood