Not bad for a start. What program did you make this with?

A bit more variety in the notes would help...consider what kind of mood you're trying to evoke, then compose the track from that. Maybe listen to a few movie soundtracks first if you want to get some ideas. "Druiden" sounds pretty sword-&-sorcery; you could check out theme tunes from stuff like the LOtR flicks, Clash of the Titans, etc. Also the drum track is a bit too obvious...for a tune conveying magic or mystery, the emphasis should be on the melody, not the beat. Beat emphasis is better for action-oriented stuff, like first-person shooter games.

I think there’s the bones of a good idea here, but it needs some work. The notes are a bit out of tune with each other, and the drum track is uninteresting. I also think adding another instrument over the bassline would’ve helped it.

Again, I can see a good idea here, but the song itself just doesn’t live up to it. Keep going; practice makes perfect!