Hmm..

Good try... but the guitar through the whole thing... ick... toooooo heavy man... Opening with in the first couple measures it came in was pretty cool, but then you should fall back to something else... I dunno what else to say... just not my cup of tea... it's overbearing.... I reeeeally like the intro though, nice work on it... but the rest was... I'd like to see a remake :-)