Not bad!

Очень сильно зашла ударная партия, качает и приятна на слух. А вот инструмент который играет в начале немного выделяется на фоне этой ударной партии весь трек. На мой взгляд трек стоит чуть доработать (дописать). И будет всё клево и для танцевального трека идеально.

The percussion part has gone very far, it shakes and is pleasant to the ear. But the instrument that plays at the beginning stands out a little against the background of this percussion part of the entire track. In my opinion, the track should be slightly modified (completed). And everything will be cool and perfect for a dance track.

It looks amazing on you but a bit empty, improve that aspect and you will achieve a lot

Agree with @Casporb, it’s just too repetitive. I got excited initially because it’s a cool concept, but then that was the whole song. The ending was also really abrupt.

Feels like a real missed opportunity. So damn repetitive!
Edit: If that was what you were doing, you could of put it in a short loop. Actual songs need VARIATION.