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Jan 19, 2008 | 9:32 PM EST
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7.8 MB
3 min 26 sec
4.32 / 5.00

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Rated 4.32 / 5 stars
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Electronic - Techno

Author Comments

a more technoesque (lol thats not a word is it?) version of the old one



Rated 5 / 5 stars

Thumbs up 4 the remake

this is alot, i mean ALOT better than the other one definately! I absolutely love it XD
Though i must agree about the sound around 2:38 and the burp ending.

fosterCHILD16 responds:

yeah ill work on the ending and try to get a 3.0 up soon, thanks for reviewing!



Rated 4 / 5 stars


That's a lot better, the song makes more sense and the high pitch sound is much less deafening. I also like the fact that it's a bit faster than the previous version. That was the good part, for the bad part: Your outro (2:30 to end) was totally nowhere: the way ur main sound comes back just scraps the mood of the song. Also, the "burp" at the very end isn't cool or anything, I think the best way to finish your song would be with a fade out. Overall, that was a great progression and I'm looking forward to, perhaps, a 3.0! ^^

fosterCHILD16 responds:

yeah im still iffy on the end, version 3 will be coming out some time in the near future, hopefully sooner than the gap between 1 and thanks for the review



Rated 3 / 5 stars


Vast improvement over your first version, but there are still two things bothering me. There seems to be excess samples or at least measures that don't need to be in the song (i.e. claps). Also, the sounds might be cool, but sometimes it is really hard to tell where the tune is headed. It sounds somewhat dissonant, which could be the sound you are going for, but I still like the way they sound. It especially gets better after the 2-minute mark when you bring in the flanged guitar sound. However, around 2:38 when the next beat comes in, it just kind of erupts with no build-up. Original trance is ALL about the build-up and the emotion or the passion behind the music. Without those, it isn't really trance anymore. It could simply become techno which was the direction this song almost headed. But, for now... come to think of it, it's Dark Trance. I don't see it often, but it certainly is on the verge of becoming what is techno. Anyways, with all the mumbo-jumbo aside, the song is certainly superior to its predecessor (version 1). So, I enjoyed it a bit, but improvements would be great! Still, good job! Keep up the good work!

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fosterCHILD16 responds:

well i kinda was changing it to a more up beat feel, my friend asked me to, i get what your saying though, i think ill try a rework that holds more true to trance, thanks for reviewing