You can't really hear the vocals that come in at 0:40. I also think it would've been better of they came in at measure 20 instead of 22 or measure 16. It kind of sounds like a cartoon network show intro which I really like. The chromatic motion that the guitar follows starting at 0:59 gets repetitive imo because it carries on for a bit too long. A bit more could've been added to it imo.