The ambience and voice of the dude were on point, in rhythm, tone and overall manner. And the whole nightmarish flesh spider idea was awesome, lol. I feel like adding some of those customer approval commentaries would be good to contrast with the advertiser's speech and perhaps trying to add more highs and lows to his discourse, while still keeping that infomercial iconic way of speaking. Those are some ideas I had, thank you for making this.