It’s a good song, but the section between 2:34 and 3:00 is a little awkward in my opinion though. It’s just kinda strange. Anyway, you did a great job with this song, and other than that one section it’s pretty good!
Hate.
A deep dislike of everything around you. The world turned its back on you; why care? Your heart has iced over, hard as a stone. How can everyone seem so happy when I feel so distraught? How dare they? This is what it has come down to. Justify, justify. The world keeps turning, surely to spite you.
And you hate it.
ON SOUNDCLOUD:
https://on.soundcloud.com/8SmnQijcAwHz5vtc6
ON SPOTIFY:
https://open.spotify.com/track/21VxuqEH8Hv1BIZGjTa8mn
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It’s a good song, but the section between 2:34 and 3:00 is a little awkward in my opinion though. It’s just kinda strange. Anyway, you did a great job with this song, and other than that one section it’s pretty good!
Thanks! This one is pretty old, and it wasn’t too technically sound even then.
If this track had a heavy freeform bass in it (drop!), the kicks a bit harder hitting it would be amazing
Thank you for the review!
i get the feeling of constant aggression mixed with the feeling of wanting to know why.
the feeling to fight the world and the world not attacking back.
the mixing the hits and the melody contribute to something that feels heavy without the use of being bass heavy i like it.
I tried to leave these open to interpretation, and that is seriously a deep one
I am not gonna lie, this song has quite the determined tone. That part at 2:38 too, phew!
Good job!
~SpeedoRH
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