I like the dreamy atmosphere at the beginning. The reverb is a bit heavy here, but the mix holds up pretty well. There’s a good sense of build into :48, and the blissful melodies and quirky sound design at the refrain are great. The chord progression and arrangement of this piece are a bit cliche, and the mix is a bit bottom-heavy during the busier sections. I like the synth arpeggios at 2:05, and you lead back into the refrain at 2:42 effectively too. I might’ve liked to hear some more variation on the main melodies during the second refrain, but otherwise the progression is strong here. Overall, solid work with the mood, instrumentation, production quality, and atmosphere. Keep at it, MarquinRobes! :)

Mixing, mastering, and balance
1.75/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
1/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
1.75/2
Instrumentation and sound design
.75/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1.25/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
.25/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
.75/1
Composite score
7.5/10