how's it going! I'm VariableGR and I'll support you with a review (ノ^_^)ノ
The song itself is interesting, however it does not have a defined structure that marks which is the strong part of the song, you can tell which part is but it does not have an entrance or a mark
I recommend you to see some tutorials on musical structure, for the part of the instruments I like the synths that it has
Also the mixing part you have to practice the side chain, bass mix and kick
I like the song, for a start in this area it is very good (＾∇＾)ﾉ♪
Best of luck and keep practicing (ノ^_^)ノ＼(ﾟｰﾟ＼)

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you should add some sidechaining to make the kick more punchy (you can also make it where it has a pulsating energy like edm songs).