good after a while
the beginning isn't all too good, the rest of it is just fine for a hip-hop track though
why the beginning wasn't good
1.The organ dragged out too much, which i wouldnt mind, if it was a decent organ sound, try a leslie-hall on this one
2.The beat starts right away, it would be nice to have a fill into it, or at least an organ "a'capella"
8/4 whole song could use some work, like stronger bass basically
good overall, keep it up!