Hmm this was interesting
well i must admit this was kinda "ENTERTAINING" the dialog was pretty funny, the voices were very clear though, and the the extra sounds and music was a good addition for this, but i actually like this as it kind of just spoke to you with character, and all the good quality of this was great, it kind of reminded me of a standup, but aagin the quality was fantastic, so great stuff here, very amusing, but anyways good stuff.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So what to improve on this fantastic piece, it was great, it was very sharp and clear sounding, maybe if anything is changed or added on this maybe you should go more with adding more characters in there for a more random funny points in there.