Decent tune

So this was a decent tune you have here its slightly slow at the starting and doesnt have much in "VARIATY" of sounds and such, the whole tune seems like that so thats something you should work on the pitch was too high and needs more deeper sounds, also needs that variaty of mixture sounds. The tune is kinda long, but still the same ol high pitched tune, needs some harder sounds some deeper and darker feel too it plus all the mix of some variaty, just something to think about, but it was alright just needs more effort there.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the whole tune seems like that so thats something you should work on the pitch was too high and needs more deeper sounds, also needs that variaty of mixture sounds.

really greatly done

The beginning sounds like a tv show then it gets crazy awesome with the changing beats....you should make more of these!

why 1.52?

this is a great song for not only being first-time, just overall its just good, just dont understand why this is only 1.52 rated? it deserves at least a 3 right now,

good job on it
9-5 9 for some overused distortion in some places