I have seen your post and immediately check your music. I like this one, because there is something good here something interesting and unique. The percussion and the piano chords somehow work together and the low saw wave acts like a error noise which I like it. On the 13 second mark the violin lead thingy doesn't have a steady melody, it doesn't match the whole feel and vibe of the other instruments you could use another instrument to complement the other instruments or maybe EQ the lead and add reverb. Overall it's pretty good not the best but not the worst either, it's interesting and could be improved more and btw Trance doesn't sound like this, this piece is more of a experimental type thingy.