I read the thread.

You sound better since I listen to one of your songs on your myspace. I still think some of your notes are off key, though.
You've gotten louder, which is good.
I like your attempt to get passionate with your lyrics, but I think you should hold them notes longer to give it a better.
It's a good song, man. I mean, I'm more techno, but I think this song is good for a ballad, I think that's what mellow rock songs are called.
I didn't really like hearing the pick scrape on the strings. I like the sliding of your fingers in the song though.
5/5