I read the thread.
You sound better since I listen to one of your songs on your myspace. I still think some of your notes are off key, though.
You've gotten louder, which is good.
I like your attempt to get passionate with your lyrics, but I think you should hold them notes longer to give it a better.
It's a good song, man. I mean, I'm more techno, but I think this song is good for a ballad, I think that's what mellow rock songs are called.
I didn't really like hearing the pick scrape on the strings. I like the sliding of your fingers in the song though.
thanks man. Yea the beginning of the song especially i'm a little pitchy. But i've been practicing alot more to get better. I'm glad it seems to be paying off. Sorry about the pick on the strings, it's an acoustic guitar so theres not a whole lot i could do about it.
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