It's an interesting take on the theme, and loops neatly...
However, I would suggest shifting the instrument change, at 1:02, to around 0:35. And... maybe some more beat-setting percussion... a more prominent tune-setting instrument ( like the one that plays the main tune for the first minute ) .
it probably would sound better shifting around 0:35, seeing as it takes a little too long to pick up and stuff.
and if by adding some "more beat-setting percussion" you're referring to the original instruments in the song, then trust me, i'm already on that. :]
thanks for the review Garbeld.
It somehow didn't exactly touch the spot but it has potential,
maybe try a little bit more variation in that repetitive 5 note (like ya did at 1:02, that was cool), and find a way to put more oomph into the main melody perhaps a instrument to guide it?
Meh, you'll get there :D
i understand exactly what you mean.
i'll try my best.