I'm on monitors by a stroke of luck.
It's clean. Your kick is bassy as. I hear all your arps, your 808s, acid stabs and the whole acid house vibe. All them lows kick, in a club it works. On stereo, on monitors....its all in the low mid. Nothing in the mid high or high. All that low energy could potentially kill some speakers where peeps try and bring highs out.
It's a great track, the composition is great, it's clean and well comp'd. I don't necessarily know exactly what to make high, maybe some octaved arpeggios? idk.
it's about a 7 now with potential for a 10