The synth at the beginning sounds a bit square and dry, but when the beat comes in it blends into the texture nicely. Again, these are some really evocative lyrics, and I think the vocals sit better in the mix here. The vocal layering in the final chorus really hits the spot, although it's a bit harder for me to come up with an excuse for that abrupt ending here than it was in "Designated Drivers." The composition could've been a tad more dynamic, too. I feel like the vocals are doing most of the work of keeping the piece engaging over time. That said, you did a good job giving a sugary pop-rock flair to unrequited love, and between the strong production quality and vocals, you've earned yourself a new follower my friend. Cheers! ^^

Good job mate!