I'm getting more used to all of the loops you have made and I really think you are improving. I'm not the biggest hip hop fan, but I can tell you are trying to imitate it. I made some earlier remarks how your stuff sounded like it was from a video game. It's nice to know I was accurate on exactly what you are trying to portray, at least some of the time. The beeping sounds are pretty nice, and I like the little "letdown" at the end. I will say that it needs a bit more variety and with more stuff going on.