The snare doesn't really fit imo and I think you should tone down that kick a lot. The mix sounds kind of cluttered. I'm not the biggest fan of the first chord due to how dissonant it sounds. The song sounds like it's going for lo - fi so I would recommend chords with more clarity. I would also consider maybe a glissando in the progression somewhere. Maybe something like F#maj7 - A#m#5 - Fm7. Then you can try adding passing notes using the F# scale.