It sounds kind of muddy to me and I really wish this was expanded on some more because I think what you have here is pretty cool but could be even cooler. Maybe a bit more fast paced with a nice melody. Not bad overall.
My next track is called "The Light Shines Through". Through every difficult situation we face, there is always a light which will help us overcome these challenges. I hope you enjoy this track!
It sounds kind of muddy to me and I really wish this was expanded on some more because I think what you have here is pretty cool but could be even cooler. Maybe a bit more fast paced with a nice melody. Not bad overall.
Thank you for listening to my track and thank you for your honest feedback! I'm just starting out in music production so I have a lot to learn. Making music is a hobby I have picked up on the side. I do wish to advance my skills and have fun in the process. Any input and constructive criticism is much appreciated as that will help me grow and become a better music producer. Looking back at this track, I feel I should have spent more time on mastering to get the right balance of sounds. I will definitely take your suggestions, rework my song, try to incorporate a more complete melody, and hopefully, I can make it even better. Thank you again.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.