That song's rad. I love the way the guitar follows the vocals as the tempo fluctuates -- I'm guessing you recorded both at the same time? Sounds dope.
I'm wondering how the mix would sound if the panning was a little more extreme. I got the sense that guitar and vocals were both dead center. Maybe you could try that John Lennon ADR stuff to create the illusion everything's double-tracked.
Interesting choice at the end, singing the word "toward" like "too-word" -- I always thought that word was one syllable, but it sounded cool the way you sang it.
I dig that "moonlight won't reach your eyes" line, it puts a cool image in my head