The melody feels random. It's really not cohesive.

I kinda dig the additional percussions halfway through tho.

Okay let me give some helpful feedback;
it assaults' the ears too much
It's too repetitive
There is no rhythm to it.
If you want to do something simple, then do something simple with a simple beat, timing, etc.
If you want to do something complex then it's tougher balancing act but you can't be as repetitive as you are here.
I'm bad at making music too and sure as heck this sounds like it was mashed together with little to no effort put into it.