Hmm its ok..
The "doof doof" in the background isnt bassy enough. If you amped that up, i dont know how you do, but if you could it would fix the song. And the chords at the begginning are out of tune, you know how u press different key on the keyboard at the same time? Yeah.
Otherwise its good :).
the chords at the beggining ar terrible the rest is ok i guess but fix thoes chords right away they are terrrible.