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Raspando mi cara en el cielo

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This one does not sound nearly as adventurous as some of your other uploads. While you seem to have a general atmosphere in place, I'm having a hard time staying engaged given what has been presented.

Looking at the title, it appears that the objective was to give the listener a sense of floating off the ground. With the timbre of the chords and your choice of minimal bass presence, I believe you accomplished that very well. The saw chords with the attack provide that "airy" tone I think you were looking for, and the lack of bass allows the mix of the track to be untethered from any rigid groove.

An issue that seems to have escaped you, however, is the lack of interest in the track required to keep someone absorbed to your theme. We have a fairly simple chord progression, a standard set of not-punchy drum samples, and a lead (I think?) that is almost too wispy to be able to discern the melody. In my opinion, this is the biggest flaw; there simply isn't enough variation in this upload, and it sounds more like a concept than a finished track.

All the best.

Maevings responds:

I will take this into consideration, Thanks!

Credits & Info

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Uploaded
Mar 16, 2022
2:52 PM EDT
Genre
Synthwave
File Info
Song
1.9 MB
2 min 3 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.