I like the frantic acid synth riff at the beginning and the robotic-sounding vocals. The atmosphere is rich and eerie, although you quickly overuse the vocals. I like the drop at :44, especially the rhythmic content and the call-and-response between the higher-pitched and bass synths. The breakdown at 1:29 was good for a bit of variety, but it was also very short-lived and didn’t quite scratch my itch for some more harmonic depth in the piece. At some point, I would’ve liked to see you lean more heavily on atmospheric or melodic content to fill the texture, rather than the gritty, minimal synths. I do like how the piece comes full-circle towards the end, though, with that apprehensive acid riff. Overall, the production quality and rhythmic content here are really good, and I also enjoy the sound design and progression. That said, the composition is a tad underwhelming in terms of harmony and texture, and could also use a richer atmosphere at times. Still, you’ve made a catchy track with neat instrumentals and a distinct, ominous mood here, Demonicity. Keep at it! ^_^
Mixing, mastering, and balance
2/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
.75/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
1/2
Instrumentation and sound design
.75/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
.75/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
.75/1
Composite score
7/10