I can't give a full 10 for it, considering it's just a draft/demo, but I can see that you got a pretty solid foundation to work from. The twisted "merry christmas" voice in the beginning and end are nice touches.
I'd like to see what direction this track ends up going. Good job so far.
This is cool and the beginning part cracked me up!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.