The main loop is very based and cheesy, i'm assuming you downloaded it from somewere but if not then good job! and as my fellow creator supermelon said I think if it's lo-fi you are aiming for you might wanna decrease the sample quality and eq the drums.

Also missing the bass ;-;

Lofi is my specialty and I can give you a lot of feedback on it.

I feel like the high frequencies are a bit too much... they pierce my ears, but for the rest, very very nice!

so calming. reminds me of the song used in crossroads by mbed

Cool