This sounds awesome!!! Can I use this in GD?

Y'know, this is actually fantastic. I'm not sure if it's a sample or the melody is from scratch. Either way, this is awesome, I'm very impressed. The energy is amazing, it's all coming straight at you! The little break from the drums and the melody in the middle is very impressive and a very mature decision to make. It made the song feel much more well-rounded and whole. I honestly don't have many complaints at all and I know you were seeking advice but if this is one of your first attempts I don't think there is much I can tell you. It's also very individual and unique which is hard to do in breakcore considering everybody uses the same drums but managing this kind of energy at this kind of tempo is so impressive. Well Done, pat on the back. I will say though, even though the breaks are chopped well they are not mixed that well. If you want I can give you some tips regarding that but other than that, well done!!