Я впервые удивился, что ты можешь что-то. Но всё равно мимо получается.

Decent track! Althought I do think this track needs a little bit of more work.

This track needs more instruments and some instruments that has been already used for this song needs to be changed.

I'm not really a big fan of the drum pattern you used, it seems to be a bit repetitive as it just kept being looped so that needs to be altered, but I'll give a pass on that.

The song might seem pretty happy but oddly to me the song emotions seems kinda repetitive to me. As for any producer, Songs are like a story and it also express it's emotions which invokes other listeners to have that feeling.

Overall I will say you really did thought of this out pretty well but sometimes it needs to turn out well at the same time. Pretty decent track!

Like the other guy was saying about the weird transition before the drop at 0:32 I agree. Maybe taking a listen to the fast drum part and then maybe fixing it would help.

Good job!

This song feels very bland to me like there's a lot of room for thing that could be added or arranged differently. The beginning high pitched instrument didn't feel pleasant to listen to either. I recommend starting off with a chord progression that uses that note. Maybe an octave lower perhaps. Here's a chord progression for the beginning: Cm - BbMaj - G#Maj - GMaj - BDim then back to the beginning. I actually don't what key signature these chords are in so you might have to go based off what sounds good to you when you add in different chords so they don't repeat and become boring. Passing notes and chords are also nice. I'm also not a fan of the drum pattern. It kinda messed up the songs flow imo. 0:32 has this weird transition that feels like it looped but it was a noticable loop. The song is also very repetitive.

1) Высокочастотный лид меня не очень устроил. Написание атональное, причём не оправдано общей задумкой. Минус балл.
2) Спасибо, что ты не забыл про ритмическую структуру драм-н-бейса. Перкуссии не хватило, но тут в принципе её много пихать и не нужно. Минус полбалла.
3) Общая композиция как будто запиналась на протяжении всего трека. Минус балл.
4) Не хватило метафизики прекрасной дивы. Для этого надо было добавить побольше инструментов, плюс убрать эйсиды. Минус полтора балла.

Смени ударные, в который раз прошу. Используя один и тот же кик из трека в трек, ты никуда не уедешь. Надоедает до невозможности.

Итоги: звучание - 7, метафизика - 7, атмосфера - 7, динамика - 7. 7 из десяти. Хорошо!

Изменено: я ставлю такую оценку, которую трек реально заслуживает.

Nice! I'm gonna rate it 5 stars cos it deserves a lot more than 3!