So the theme itself and the melodic content in the background is really really good.

The percussion lets this down, not so much the style and beats you've gone for. More the sample choice and lack of thought for the tones underneath them. It's just a dry hihat and snare with a slight kick undertone.

Take your time choosing samples, be more careful with your mastering of these elements as they can make or break a track. Even a little bit more care with volume here would have made a huge difference

Not from the review request club but saw your post on there so thought I'd check it out!

Hey, this is pretty good!