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Take me all the way

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I proudly present you my new single

if you ever wish to support my work please do it here :)


https://tenodiboris.bandcamp.com/track/take-me-all-the-way


https://amazingradio.com/profile/tenodib/tunes/f9f2c136-1682-40e3-b595-9f82b2a73407


also on yt:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yO-w6bpEkZA


Lyrics:

Ver. 

I made my self a prison and I thought it's alright

but then you came in, and showed me the light

Nothing ever felt so right

and as long as I'm with you it will just be alright

Chorus:

Take me all the way, to the moon I don't care as long as you're there

Night and day I think of you babe

and I'm not afraid

Take my hand and say

say there is nothing holding us to stay

that we can just go away

pack our things and fly away

fly away


Bridge:

Take me all the way

Chorus:

Take me all the way

Take me all the way, to the moon I don't care as long as you're there

Night and day I think of you babe

and I'm not afraid

Take my hand and say

say there is nothing holding us to stay

that we can just go away

pack our things and fly away

fly away


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GOOD!!!!!

Sounds like take on me/blinded by the lights. Besides being a tad bit repetitive, great work!

I immediately thought of Take on me when I heard the beggining drums lol

TenodiBoris responds:

at least it got your attention :D I hope that you liked my song :)

First of all, I gotta say that this song is amazing. You did a fantastic job!
After my first listen I noticed some things that could be improved. I feel like you brought in the intensity of the song a bit too early, referring to the intro. Instead of starting with those drums, you could've copied the chords & the ambience from the chorus and added some lowpass and some more reverb to it, and then brought in the drums after a couple bars, kind of like how it is in Blinding Lights by The Weeknd.

At 00:06, the drums along with the melodies and the bass, really sounds awesome together. Not much I can say about it to be honest. You did a great job with 'em!

The vocals at 00:31 are siiick! I love the way you used autotune. You didn't use too much, nor too little, it's really just perfect. At 00:55 when the vocals are playing along with the other instruments, I sometimes find it hard to hear exactly what you're singing, and it might be because of all of the effects on the vocals. It could also be that the other instruments are overpowering the vocals. So maybe try either boosting the volume of the vocals, or adding some more saturation, or reducing the amount of reverb on them.
The lyrics overall are really nice. All of the words you used really glued well together and it's not complete bullcrap like the hiphop songs these days where most of it rarely makes sense lol.

I'd love to see a little bit of a change in the second drop. Maybe a change in the melodies, a change of rythm, or maybe remove/bring in a new sound. It doesn't get overly repetitive, but since you did such a great job with this song there's not much I can say, so I have to be nitpicky lol.

But yeah man, overall this is superb! You should take advantage over your own voice more often, because there are not many newgrounders who use vocals in their music, which makes you stand out which is a huge plus. Good job man, you smashed it with this one!

TenodiBoris responds:

Thank you alot for your detailed review, it is much appreciated. cheers :)

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Uploaded
Jan 23, 2022
12:14 PM EST
Genre
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7.8 MB
3 min 25 sec
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