My man.

So much good going on here and it's hampered by a high comp, heavy limiter. It's just too loud overall. I can't play this even at 50%. Now, nothings peaking, it's not clipping but you're drums have set the comp point, nothing else gets to breathe. I hear promise in all parts, the acid bass, the slow flange/phase pad, the acid stab melody. But the comp washes everything away. I also suspect this was a headphone mix as its narrow with a bass compensate.

I think you have good work here if you go back and remix this. I recommend doing some cross referencing with producers you want to emulate, look up the production notes and emulate as you can. Be testing your mixes on 5 different set ups too, 4 should be on other peoples gear. if it sits on everything flat, you got a mix.

keep it up. I always enjoy your work, just need to continue refining