So you are still alive. Well, good to have you back, Will. Now for the music. It's a bit stiff. The song felt as if it were in the same key the whole time. It seems the background tune didn't fit the vocals, and they may even have been off beat with each other. The soundfont, too, wasn't very interesting.
I apologize if I seem to ramble, but I'm eager to see improvement. Maybe try playing around with individual aspects of songs until you get them right.