This is the second version of my track. The original version has vocals (technically just me speaking). . .This version is an instrumental. Link to the original below...
Very dreamy, I like it. The toms at 3:11 scared me xD, they're too loud. I'd also suggest adding subtle risers in the buildups, and I think the snares in the drops need to be changed, maybe a clap? But overall, I think this is pretty good.
As for the vocal mix, the 'courage' was off-beat and threw me off. But nonetheless, vocals were a nice addition.
Edit: Yep it looks good now
Sorry about the toms. . . when I normalized the audio, the toms did not get normalized. I have fixed this... hopefully. Thanks for your feedback.
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ReverieOfTrance 
