Ok (⁠☞ﾟ⁠∀ﾟ⁠)⁠☞ review time,
Harmony:
It is quite interesting, melancholic and cold, the violins are soft and the piano was a good selection
I would like the piano pattern in the accompaniment to change a bit more so that it gives it a warmer vibe but maintains its main emotion
Technical:
The piano sounds very synthetic, you should put a bit of focus on the speed of the notes to make it sound more relaxed, in the violins also try to add violas or chellos in staccato for more rhythm
In mixing at the moment I don't have much reference because I don't have good headphones at work haha
For part of the duration it is good that it is only a minute, but only a few small adjustments can improve it
I recommend you download it:
BBC orchestra free edition LABS
And Key Classical Piano
These are free and give you better experience for music ←⁠(⁠>⁠▽⁠<⁠)⁠ﾉ

This is... actually beautiful!