Decent

This was notbad pretty decent if you ask me I do think you should speed up some points and make this whole piece much longer aswell, it was kind of short but adding some build up and some faster tempos it would be much better for it, you have a nice style here though keep that up.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More longer, more build up and faster tones.

~X~

nice song!

Nice melody in the beginning :D
I like it xD
pretty cool drums, but i think it would be better if u'd put them a litl louder.
drums are fitting the song well!
make sure u dont repeat ur melody too much.. put some variation in it or try adding a second melody that suits ur first melody (is really hard, i know)
ah well, u'v done well! keep it up!

5/5
9/10

Btw, this is Kriz&F-777's collabprofile, mind checking out some of our collabsongs?

Crazy

Hehe, I like it. Sounds twisted and brutal, kind of. Still the music is relativly rythmical and flows together nicely. The choice of sound and everything is pretty unique, havn't heard anything like this before. Keep up the good work!

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