good beat

47 threw 1:12 sucked man srry. but besides that everything eles is pretty good if you could just change that man this would be awesome and maybe use some other sounds. even tho I like it

You include everything at the right time.

You know how to bring in new sounds quite well.
And the change in song to that of what sounded to me like an older piano score, to back to the style you were doing, works.
Keep it up, you have potential.