Needs some work
This sounds really good, you're style is a little unusal though. I mean, there are parts where you kinda suprise the persion who is listening. But in the song, you're backbeat never really stays on, and it is just a giant solo without any real solid beat. It changes constantly with rythem, it will go into some little mini solo that doens't really connect to the origianl beat very well, and the backbeat throughout the song is either not there, or it changes. I think you just need to work a little bit on how you set up you're songs. But in all, I think it is a song worth listening to.