There's a few things in here where you can tell you took a nice attempt at the song. The percussion and filler riffs come out every now and then. The title "Deadly Nightmare" just doesn't really seem to fit the piece, I don't really get that feeling of horror or approaching death. Also, if you're going to use Fruity Loops, try to stay away from using the preset voices, it just takes away a lot from the song, I mean, the "148 in progress..." bit just doesn't really fit. Also it's a really repetetive song, try to mix things up a bit, give it a new sounds here and there. For example, the majority of songs are set up as verse, verse, chorus, verse, verse, chorus, bridge... etcetera, and they change but keep the same flow. It was a nice attempt though, keep at it and you'll get much better.
~Dylan Glow ^_^
yeah i usially try n keep away from the preset voices but idk i used em n yeah i cant think of a name so i put a generic 1. Still workin on makin the song into verses n makin a chorus.
thx 4 the actual review... good reviews are rare here on Newgrounds
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