sounds like something my brother would make
This a good kind of 6. I know sometimes those kind of scores are handed out as a bad thing but I have to rate you according to how I think you would compare against your actual potential. This song shows a lack of refinement (being that you were first starting out) but plenty of potential...
in the end that's what matters - you never want to start out great and then hit and immediate apex. that's like a death sentence for a musician or composer that want to make something of his work.